Remarkable Descriptions
We learn early on as Realtors that details sell properties. And, that our ability to describe a property, so that the details come to life and tell a compelling story, that appeals to a potential buyer’s emotions, is one of the most critical components of marketing a future home. Today, it is even more important, as the remarks that we enter into the MLS are pushed to many other websites like Realtor.com. Under the umbrella of “this is what NOT to do”, I bring you the following remarkable description. They describe a beautiful waterfront unit in one of Miami’s newest bayfront buildings:
Large 3Bed/2Bath in new Building. One Miami Beautiful see views of port of Miami,Biscayne bay,& South Beach.Amazing kitchen,compleate stainless still appliances,slab granite counters,European high end cabinets,walk in closets,large bedrooms.2brand new gyms,24hr,concierge,1parking space & 1valet with out cost,high end luxurious pool deck with stunning pools & tons of space to lay out,2 incredible party rooms w/ gourmet kitchens available to rent out for a low fee.Enjoy living in the heart of Downtown!
Does it make you want to make an appointment to see it? Would you hire that Realtor to sell your property? I didn’t think so.
Date: Wednesday, September, 26th 2007 @ 04:30:17 PM Views: 255
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Jim Hirschhorn
Tom, that is too funny. I am reading this and thinking, how can I tell you tactifully that there are so many typos and misspellings? I especially like that there is only 1 Valet. Adds for a more personal touch!